After the peer review project it made me realize some of the flaws in my paper. For one, I’m a comma whore and use a shit ton throughout my paper. Having someone else read my paper also helped me see the questions left unanswered and things that are just flat out irrelevant. Furthermore, it helped me see where other people are in the class. Sometimes I feel overwhelmed and like I should be doing Marlenwork all dey erry dey. After reading Brock’s paper I felt a lot better though, for these were just our first shitty drafts. While editing his paper I didn’t look at grammar or sentence structure, but basically just the layout of his ideas and how he explained things. The rubric helped by having a sort-of checklist of things I needed to look at, but I didn’t like the number scale because I feel pretty generous. For this, however, Brock told me to blam his paper, so I did.
Blog 15- what i learned
